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Inspiration in the New West

“Go West, young man,” wrote Horace Greeley in 1865. One hundred and forty-six years later, I took his advice, and I’m glad I did.

My family and I went to visit my cousin and her family (thanks, guys!) in Colorado over the Independence Day weekend. My wife, Kate, does a much better job of talking about our travels over on her blog, so for a more complete download, click over to her site.

As for me, well, I’ve seen mountains on a number of continents, but few measure up to the way the Rockies jut upward from the plains, an imposing wall of stone that probably prompted early American settlers to say, “Whoa, those are big. I don’t want to cross those. Let’s just put Denver here.” I never quite bought into the whole romantic notion of the Old West, but I have to say, the New West did a great job of putting my writer-brain to work. Continue reading

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Getting close to submission time

Today I had the distinct and totally awesome pleasure of meeting my literary agent, Sara Megibow of the Nelson Literary Agency, in person for the first time. She’s an absolute joy, and our lunch merely confirmed that I made a great choice in querying her agency. Not only does she know her stuff, but she’s a genuine, utterly wonderful person. I totally get why her other authors are so proud to be on Team Megibow.

We had a great lunch, and Sara gave me and my wife a lot of insight into why she chose to represent Spacebuckler and how the submission process will shake out.

Submissions. To actual publishers. Continue reading

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Ride forth, Napoleon!

"Able was I, ere I saw Elba...able to ride right around it!."

Just a short update, which is fitting given the subject at right. (Actually, Napoleon Bonaparte was of average height for the time; the British papers portrayed him as diminutive.)

Anyway. I’ve been wanting this particular t-shirt for quite some time, and lo, I finally ordered it. Should all go well, I plan to wear it for the debut of my second book. Ambitious, I know, because the first hasn’t even been submitted to publishers yet. (But soon! And then I’ll be a wreck while I await word on it.) But the second book — currently being pounded out in very rough, first-draft form — might have something to do with Old Boney.

The book won’t have him on a bicycle, of course.

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I don’t want to talk about it

"It's the Romulans! Quick! We need to talk this out rationally before we act!."

Picture this: The U.S.S. Enterprise (D) is facing some sort of massive problem that threatens the existence of the ship, crew and Life As We Know It. The legendary Jean-Luc Picard stands up from the captain’s chair, stares into the viewscreen and gives a fateful order.

“Conference,” he intones.

And everyone files out off the bridge — in the middle of a crisis — and heads back to the conference room, with its plush chairs and lovely views of space. Everyone sits down and begins to share information. Data expounds, Worf says something crochety, the counselor lady gets all new-agey, and Picard then makes a command decision. It’s all very civilized. If cappuccinos weren’t involved, they should’ve been. Continue reading

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It’s not always easier the second time around

A book review in The New York Times on Saturday caught my eye — not because of the book, but because of what the reviewer had to say about second novels:

It’s hard to think of a less privileged creation than the second novel. When we admire a writer’s debut, it’s like falling in love across a crowded room; we are seduced by a part that we have mistaken for the whole. And when the follow-up reveals, as it must, a more complex picture than we at first believed we saw, our feelings are mixed.

I find that, for the writer, the feelings when writing that second novel are equally mixed, if not more so. Continue reading

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I write, therefore I revise

Get used to this image. If you write, you

Last week, I packed off the fifth version of Spacebuckler to my awesome and always-upbeat agent, Sara Megibow. In celebration, I thought I’d blog about what revisions mean to a would-be novelist like myself. (Actually, in terms of celebration, I had a Brooklyn Lager. But you get the idea.)

It took me roughly five months or so to pound out the first draft of my book. And naturally, being all kinds of green and uninformed, I got out the red pen, gave it a line edit and declared it finished. And yes, I still managed to get an agent, despite this severe but blessedly temporary case of shortsightedness. Anywya, Sara responded to my partial manuscript in August of last year, declaring the idea compelling, but the plotting far less so. She agreed to read a revision. And thus began versions two thorough five. She offered to rep me after version four. Continue reading

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From the newsroom to the bookshelf

Listen, bub. Writin' is writin'. Now I gotta churn out 500 words in the next ten minutes. Shoo. (For the record, this is not me. Thankfully.)

Originally, my sailing-ships-in-space idea wasn’t going to be a novel, but rather a role-playing game like Dungeons & Dragons. At the time, I had plenty of reasons for taking that tack — a strong DIY game e-publishing market, low overhead, Wizards of the Coast’s “d20” open-source rules system and, perhaps most importantly, a geeked-out personal background.

But you know what? Looking back, I can honestly say that, at the time, I simply didn’t think I had it in me to write fiction. Continue reading

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Beating the odds

C'mon, baby. Papa needs a literary agent.

I’m thrilled to be repped by the talented Sara Megibow of the Nelson Literary Agency. Getting an agent is a big victory for a debut writer, and it’s not easy. Here’s some humbling stats, courtesy of Kristin Nelson’s blog. In 2010, the agency received an estimated 36,000 queries. Mine was one of them. Of those queries, Kristin and Sara requested sample pages (generally the first few chapters) from just 839 queriers. I was also one of those. Continue reading

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The alchemy of writing

The Great Work

A really old-school approach to writing?

Alchemy — lead into gold, right? Take something common and turn it into a treasure. It works for writers, too. Take an idea and work your magic, transforming it from a mere notion into something that can transform the reader’s imagination.

The ancient Art of Transformation plays a big part in my novel’s setting, but it’s not a bad metaphor for the craft of writing. I had the germ of the idea: I wanted sailing ships in space, and I wanted to do it right. I had to take that little nugget, break it down and build it back up into gold. And it started with a single question. Exactly how am I going to have sailing ships in space? Continue reading

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How to build a world

So I had an interesting mini-conversation on Twitter this morning with regard to world-building in science-fiction and fantasy, and I thought it worth expanding beyond 140 characters. After all, creating entire new universes is pretty exciting. But it’s also a lot of work.

I have two universes in my book: a 22nd century future extrapolated from our present day, and an alternate late-18th century universe in which sailing ships travel between the planets of our solar system. So what does the 22nd century look like? And how exactly do sailing ships in the 18th century travel between planets? I’m a writer, so the short answer is pretty much, “Because I said so.” Unfortunately, like parenting, it’s rarely that easy. Continue reading

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